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    • 07 Aug 2021
    • 10:00 AM - 1:00 PM (PDT)
    • Online via Zoom
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    Does Your Story Have a Passport?
    Creating Universal Stories
    that Reach Wider Audiences

    with Kathie Fong Yoneda & Pamela Jaye Smith

    This past year had proven that stories are so vitally important: people are recommending books, they’re trading books, they’re sharing stories, and they’re writing them!

    In today’s tech-heavy media world that’s often quite divisive, it’s a smart move to make your stories as universal as possible to reach a wider audience and help create more interconnectivity and open-mindedness between people of all ages – especially children and young people.

    For so many countries and cultures English is the preferred second language and with the proliferation of media distribution [print books, e-books, movies, TV, web series, podcasts, etc.] writers have more rich opportunities than ever before. 

    Using timeless principles of story-telling, this interactive presentation will explore how you too can craft IP that publishers, agents, managers, and media producers will find relevant and attractive.

    Even if your story takes place in a remote village or on another planet or dimension, you can touch upon global issues and universal archetypes that readers in many other places can relate to – while still keeping your story unique to you.

    So get your Story a Passport and give it wings to travel round the world!

             

     

    ABOUT THE SPEAKERS
    CBW-LA President Nutschell Windsor 
    with speakers Pamela Jaye Smith and Kathie Fong Yoneda

    With 35 years experience, KATHIE FONG YONEDA has worked for studios like Paramount, Universal, 20th Century Fox, and Disney, focusing on anal

    ysis and development of live action/animated film,  television, novels and web series. Her career includes exec positions with Disney, Touchstone, Island Pictures and Disney TV Animation.

    Kathie has given over 290 workshops in North America, Europe, Australia and Southeast Asia, and her column on screenwriting became The Script-Selling Game (2nd edition

    ). Partial list of clients include RAI-TV Roma, Rocaberti Writers Retreat, Royal Melbourne Institute, National Film School of Denmark, Bournemouth University, ScreenTraining Ireland, South Carolina Writers, Singapore Media Academy, Romance Writers of America, Roma WebFest, Writers Institute, Children’s Book Writers-LA, Hawaii International Film Festival, ScriptFest, and Melbourne WebFest.

    She was a guest of The Soviet Peace Committee for a 10-day media symposium in Moscow and also Keynote Speaker for Asian-Pacific Heritage Month at The Smithsonian. Kathie received the Mayor's medal from the

     City of Marseille for her work in Cultural Arts and was honored by the BronzeLens Film Festival as a Catalyst SuperStar for her work in media arts.

    Clientele includes several award-winning writers. The Script Selling Game (2nd edition) is used in screenwriting curricula in universities worldwide. She also co-exec pro

    duced the cable series Beyond the Break, the short film 30 Minutes, the web series The Big O and is on the Advisory Board for IMAGO (French Production Company) and LAWebfest.

    www.kathiefongyoneda.com



    PAMELA JAYE SMITH is a mythologist, writer, international consultant-speaker, and award-winning writer-producer-director with over thirty years experience in the media industry in features, TV, music videos, documentaries, corporate and military films, web series, and XR projects in Hollywood and around the world.

    Her Cuban Circuit script was a winner at the Bahamas Intl. Film Festival. Pamela has written five books for content creators, is co-author of two children’s books, “Petra Volare” and “Skruffy”, and writes short stories, with a few novels in progress.

    Credits include Fox, Disney, Paramount, Microsoft, Universal, RAI-TV Rome, UCLA, USC Film School, American Film Institute, Women in Film, Natl. Film Institute of Denmark, LA and Marseille WebFests, Romance Writers of America, Children’s Book Writers LA, Rocaberti Writers Retreat, media festi­vals and story conferences.

    She has written hundreds of articles and most recently her piece on “The First Gods of Mars” was accepted into The Mars Society official library. Pamela recently presented at their Annual Convention.

    Various projects have taken Smith to the Arctic, the Andes, SE Asia, Europe, and New Zealand and soon, South Africa.

    Her company MYTHWORKS helps people improve their stories, discover and live their Personal Myths, and better present their projects. Pitch Materials She is co-founder of Alpha Babe Academy and Mythic Challenges – Create Stories that Change the World.

    www.pamelajayesmith.com

    LinkedIn https://www.linkedin.com/in/pamela-jaye-smith-b06959/





    • 08 Aug 2021
    • 10:00 AM - 1:00 PM (PDT)
    • Online (Zoom)
    • 5
    Register

    ONLINE CRITIQUE SESSION
    FOR CHILDREN'S BOOK WRITERS

    Calling All Children's Book Writers: Picture Book, Early Reader, Chapter Book, Middle Grade, Young Adult, New AdultAll genres welcome

    Whether you’ve written a just handful of pages or you’re putting the finishing touches on your opus magnus, getting another set of eyes on your manuscript is a wise course of action.  At our critique sessions, you'll get constructive feedback for your manuscripts, meet potential critique partners and make new friends.


    THE VALUE OF A CRITIQUE SESSION

    As writers, we are very close to our work and oftentimes we miss certain details on story development or story elements like characters, setting, etc.

    Critique sessions allow other people with “fresh eyes” to have a look at your writing sample and read them as your future readers would, providing you with valuable feedback to improve your writing skills and get your manuscript submission-ready.

    In all our Critique Sessions, we give you feedback in the most TACTful way possible.

    TACT = Finesse, thoughtfulness or having a keen sense of what to say or do to avoid giving offense; skill in dealing with difficult or delicate situations.

    TACT is also the technique we use for our critiques:

    T = Terrific

    We share what we loved in your piece, what worked in your story and what we liked about your plot, setting, character, pacing, etc.

    A = Author Questions

    In the last few minutes of your critique time, we encourage you, as the author, to ask questions either about your story or to  clarify the comments you received.

    C = Constructive Comments We deliver, in the politest way possible, comments that are specific and helpful to help you improve your story. 

    T = Talent Talent can get you far, but hard work can get your farther. We always end by encouraging you, the author, to keep on writing. We remind you that we are here to help you achieve your writing goals.


    If you are new to critique groups, please read the following:


    1. Our group provides some guidelines and handouts to help you get the most out of the critique. The handouts will aid you in your own revision process by teaching you what to look for while critiquing your own work as well as the works of others.

    2. If you are a CBW-LA member (meaning you have registered and paid for membership via www.cbw-la.org), you may download the critique handouts under the Members Only section on the cbw-la.org website.

    If you are not a CBW-LA member, please sign up via cbw-la.org under “Events” and pay the $10 fee.

    3. Please take note of the following policies:

    Cost: Critique sessions will remain free to members and $10 for nonmembers (Due to logistics, there will no longer be a pay-at-the-door option for nonmembers. Members are not affected).

    If you wish to attend, please register so we can send you the link. If no one registers by the previous Friday night, we will cancel the event.

    If you are going to be late to, or unable to attend our session for any reason, please email us at critiqueleaders@cbw-la.org. Otherwise we will be unable to read your work that day.

      • 12 Sep 2021
      • 10:00 AM - 1:00 PM (PDT)
      • Online (Zoom)
      • 11
      Register

      ONLINE CRITIQUE SESSION
      FOR CHILDREN'S BOOK WRITERS

      Calling All Children's Book Writers: Picture Book, Early Reader, Chapter Book, Middle Grade, Young Adult, New AdultAll genres welcome

      Whether you’ve written a just handful of pages or you’re putting the finishing touches on your opus magnus, getting another set of eyes on your manuscript is a wise course of action.  At our critique sessions, you'll get constructive feedback for your manuscripts, meet potential critique partners and make new friends.


      THE VALUE OF A CRITIQUE SESSION

      As writers, we are very close to our work and oftentimes we miss certain details on story development or story elements like characters, setting, etc.

      Critique sessions allow other people with “fresh eyes” to have a look at your writing sample and read them as your future readers would, providing you with valuable feedback to improve your writing skills and get your manuscript submission-ready.

      In all our Critique Sessions, we give you feedback in the most TACTful way possible.

      TACT = Finesse, thoughtfulness or having a keen sense of what to say or do to avoid giving offense; skill in dealing with difficult or delicate situations.

      TACT is also the technique we use for our critiques:

      T = Terrific

      We share what we loved in your piece, what worked in your story and what we liked about your plot, setting, character, pacing, etc.

      A = Author Questions

      In the last few minutes of your critique time, we encourage you, as the author, to ask questions either about your story or to  clarify the comments you received.

      C = Constructive Comments We deliver, in the politest way possible, comments that are specific and helpful to help you improve your story. 

      T = Talent Talent can get you far, but hard work can get your farther. We always end by encouraging you, the author, to keep on writing. We remind you that we are here to help you achieve your writing goals.





      Past events

      11 Jul 2021 Online Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      10 Jul 2021 The Joy of Revision: See Your Work Anew
      19 Jun 2021 Nonfiction Observation for Fiction Writers (or: Why Spying is Good for You)
      17 Apr 2021 SUBMISSION STUDIO: Writing Queries, Strategizing Submissions, and Ten Ways to Translate “No” to “Yes!”
      27 Mar 2021 Character and Conflict for Picture Book, Middle Grade and Young Adult Authors
      28 Feb 2021 JUMPSTART YOUR WRITING CAREER: FIND YOUR PATH TO PUBLICATION
      18 Oct 2020 The Magical Scene Trifecta and Other Strategies for Writing Scenes
      25 Jul 2020 CBW-LA Virtual Happy Hour: Are You Feeling All Write?
      18 Jan 2020 Jumpstart Your Writing Career: Find Your Path to Publication
      05 Oct 2019 Pitch Ready: How to Revise Your Manuscript and Get it Ready to Pitch to Agents and Editors
      14 Sep 2019 Inspiration, Imagination and the Creative Spirit
      27 Jul 2019 Novel Writing Bootcamp
      31 Mar 2019 Sunday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      23 Mar 2019 The Building Blocks of Structuring Children's Books (Picture Books, Middle Grade & Young Adult Novels)
      26 Jan 2019 Jumpstart Your Writing Career: Find Your Path to Publication
      03 Nov 2018 Story-Telling for Social Justice & Advancement
      28 Jul 2018 Saturday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      21 Jul 2018 Learn How to Self-Publish a Picture Book in Two Days
      28 Apr 2018 Saturday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      24 Mar 2018 Saturday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      10 Mar 2018 Crafting & Writing Your MG/YA Series in 12 Months
      20 Jan 2018 Jumpstart Your Writing Career Workshop + Author Headshot Day
      09 Dec 2017 Unlock Your Novel: Middle Grade and YA Critique (11am- 2pm)
      02 Dec 2017 Saturday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      18 Nov 2017 Unlock Your Novel: Middle Grade and YA Critique (11am- 2pm)
      28 Oct 2017 Saturday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      14 Oct 2017 Unlock Your Novel: Middle Grade and YA Critique (11am- 2pm)
      07 Oct 2017 FIFTH ANNUAL CBW-LA Writing Day Marathon—Story Sprouts: Fables, Fairy Tales and Folk Tales (Workshop + Anthology)
      30 Sep 2017 Saturday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      23 Sep 2017 Kickstarter Crowdfunding Success Strategies
      09 Sep 2017 Unlock Your Novel: Middle Grade and YA Critique (11am- 2pm)
      26 Aug 2017 Creative Meditation: Generating Story Ideas Using Mindful Practices and Other Creative Processes
      12 Aug 2017 Saturday Critique Session: All Genres Welcome
      22 Jul 2017 Revision Strategies for Novel Writers: From Line Edits to Queries
      10 Jun 2017 How to Write a Query Letter and Find a Literary Agent with Seth Fishman of the Gernert Company Literary Agency
      03 Jun 2017 Saturday Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      08 Apr 2017 Structure, Structure, Structure! Creating Detailed Outlines & Engaging Pitches
      04 Mar 2017 BEYOND THE HERO'S JOURNEY: Other Powerful Mythic Themes and Trends for Children's and Young Adult Storytelling
      18 Feb 2017 Creative Writing Exercise Extravaganza 2
      10 Dec 2016 Creative Writing Exercise Extravaganza
      12 Nov 2016 QUERYPALOOZA 2: HOW TO WRITE AN EYE-CATCHING QUERY AND HOOK AN AGENT WITH EVE PORINCHAK OF THE JILL CORCORAN LITERARY AGENCY
      22 Oct 2016 Saturday Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      15 Oct 2016 Critique Session: Picture Books, Early Readers, Chapter Books!
      08 Oct 2016 Publishing Your Book on Kindle:The Complete Process
      17 Sep 2016 Critique Session: Picture Books, Early Readers, Chapter Books!
      27 Aug 2016 Saturday Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      13 Aug 2016 Critique Session: Picture Books, Early Readers, Chapter Books!
      06 Aug 2016 How Fiction Writers Can Use Poetry Techniques to Amp Up Their Prose
      23 Jul 2016 Twenty Reasons You're Not Getting Published with Literary Agent Steve Hutson
      25 Jun 2016 Author Marketing Secrets: How to Authentically Connect with your Readers through Social Media & Beyond
      14 May 2016 CBW-LA Writing Day Marathon—Story Sprouts: Conflict (Workshop + Anthology)
      23 Apr 2016 Beyond the Book Deal: Charting the Path Ahead
      16 Apr 2016 Date Change: Saturday Critique Session: Open to All! (1-4pm)
      26 Mar 2016 Novel Writing Bootcamp
      19 Mar 2016 Saturday Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      27 Feb 2016 The Secrets of “Show Don’t Tell”
      27 Feb 2016 CBW–LA Write-In Session
      20 Feb 2016 Saturday Critique Session: Open to All! (1-4pm)
      23 Jan 2016 Kickstarting Your Writing Career Workshop 2016
      19 Dec 2015 Saturday Critique Session: Open to All! (1-4pm)
      05 Dec 2015 CBW-LA Co-op at the Author Alley
      14 Nov 2015 Collaborative Novel Launch Party & 5th Year Anniversary Celebration
      08 Nov 2015 SUNDAY Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      07 Nov 2015 Take a Scene from Ho-hum to Holy Crap!: Writing that Gets an Editor's Attention
      24 Oct 2015 From Kickstarter to Good Morning America: One Writer Shares Her Secrets to Success
      17 Oct 2015 Saturday Critique Session: Open to All!
      26 Sep 2015 QUERYPALOOZA: HOW TO WRITE AN EYE-CATCHING QUERY AND HOOK AN AGENT WITH EVE PORINCHAK OF THE JILL CORCORAN LITERARY AGENCY
      05 Sep 2015 Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      29 Aug 2015 Critique Session: Open to All!
      22 Aug 2015 Understanding and Unlocking Amazon and Online Marketing
      25 Jul 2015 Picture Book Workshop: The Power of Critique Groups & Writing Tips I’ve Learned Along the Way
      25 Jul 2015 CBW–LA Summer Write-In Session
      20 Jun 2015 How to WOW Agents and Editors at Your Next Writing Conference
      13 Jun 2015 Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      23 May 2015 Using a Story Map to Find the Holes in Your Story
      21 May 2015 CBW–LA Third Thursday Weekday Write-In
      09 May 2015 Critique Session: Open to All!
      25 Apr 2015 Story Sprouts: Setting, FULL–DAY Writing Workshop and Anthology
      16 Apr 2015 CBW–LA Third Thursday Weekday Write-In
      11 Apr 2015 Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      19 Mar 2015 CBW–LA Third Thursday Weekday Write-In
      14 Mar 2015 Presenting Your Fantasy or Mythic Story
      07 Mar 2015 Critique Session: Picture Books, Early Readers, Chapter Books!
      28 Feb 2015 Critique Session: Middle Grade & Young Adult
      24 Jan 2015 Critique Session: Open to All!
      15 Jan 2015 CBW–LA Third Thursday Weekday Write-In
      10 Jan 2015 Kickstarting Your Writing Career Workshop 2015
      06 Dec 2014 Novel Critique Session
      20 Nov 2014 CBW–LA Third Thursday Weekday Write-In
      08 Nov 2014 Write the Truth: Creative Nonfiction and Real World Inspiration
      16 Oct 2014 CBW–LA Third Thursday Weekday Write-In
      11 Oct 2014 Story Sprouts 2014 Launch Party
      04 Oct 2014 Baiting the Hook: Nabbing the Reader With Your First Page
      27 Sep 2014 Write Stories That Change the World & Pitch Them to TV & Movie Producers
      18 Sep 2014 CBW–LA Third Thursday Weekday Write-In
      13 Sep 2014 Picture Book/Chapter Book/ Early Reader Critique Session
      23 Aug 2014 Do You Give...Good Voice? How to Find (and Nurture) Your Writing Personality
      09 Aug 2014 Novel Critique Session
      12 Jul 2014 Establishing Your Independence: Marketing Secrets from a Best-Selling Independent Author
      28 Jun 2014 Do You Give...Good Voice? How to Find (and Nurture) Your Writing Personality
      14 Jun 2014 PICTURE BOOK/CHAPTER BOOK/EARLY READER CRITIQUE SESSION
      31 May 2014 Writing Day Anthology Workshop: Get Published with CBW-LA
      19 Apr 2014 MIDDLE GRADE/YOUNG ADULT CRITIQUE SESSION
      29 Mar 2014 Novel Writing Bootcamp
      22 Feb 2014 Honing Your Middle Grade Writing Voice: A Workshop with Author Kristen Kittscher
      08 Feb 2014 PICTURE BOOK/CHAPTER BOOK/EARLY READER CRITIQUE SESSION
      11 Jan 2014 Kickstarting Your Writing Career Workshop 2014
      09 Nov 2013 MIDDLE GRADE/YOUNG ADULT CRITIQUE SESSION
      02 Nov 2013 Anthology Launch Party & Year End Celebration
      05 Oct 2013 NONFICTION/ MEMOIR CRITIQUE SESSION
      26 Sep 2013 Picture Book Workshop: The Power of Critique Groups & Writing Tips I’ve Learned Along the Way
      07 Sep 2013 PICTURE BOOK/CHAPTER BOOK/EARLY READER CRITIQUE SESSION
      17 Aug 2013 Potent World-Making: What's Myth Got to Do With It?
      27 Jul 2013 Query Critique Session
      20 Jul 2013 Writing Between the Lines: The Power of Multiple Revisions A Workshop with YA Author Carmen Rodrigues
      22 Jun 2013 Writing Day Anthology Workshop: Get Published with CBW-LA
      25 May 2013 Queries, Loglines and Blurbs: Oh My! Workshop with Author Samantha Combs
      13 Apr 2013 CRITIQUE SESSION
      30 Mar 2013 The Author's Platform: Blogging with the Bird
      12 Jan 2013 Kickstarting Your Writing Career Workshop & Lunch Social 2013

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